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This is sub charactor of Shin Aliesmoon.

My main "White elezen" grew up very early cause my friends helped me.
And I'm enjoying end-contents via "White elezen" now, thanks a lot to my friends.

But...
I'd like to enjoy the process to glow also.
So I'm going to glow this sub "Black elezen" slowly.

BTW, I'm JP player.
Why do I use English?
Because I'd like to make progress in my English via playing FF14.

So, I decided to use English when I write someting on the Lodestone as this "Black".

Could you let me know if you find any wrong English in what I wrote?
Thanks in advance.